Have fun kids.

***Here is the poem with the missing words. Have fun. Also, keep in mind the very wise advice of the Buckster: THE POEM MUST MAKE SENSE!!!***

***also, be sure to post your answers so I can get some sort of amusement out of this.***

Marked with a D.

When the chilled dough of his flesh went in an oven

not unlike those he fulled with all his __________1

I thought of his cataracts ablaze with Heaven

and __________2 with the sight of his dead wife,

light streaming from his __________3 to shape her name,

‘not Florence and not Flo but always Florrie’.

I thought how his ________4 tounge burst into __________5

but only literally, which makes me sorry,

sorry fo rhis sake there’s no _____________6 to reach.

I get it all from Earth my ______________7 bread

but he ______________8 for release from mortal speech

that kept his down, the tounge that weighed like lead.

The baker’s _____________9 that no one will see _________10

and England made to feel like some dull oaf

is smoke, enough to stink one person’s eyes

and _____________11 (not unlike flour) for one small loaf.



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13 responses to “Have fun kids.

  1. Even if the correct words were in that poem, I can’t imagine it making sense. What’s it about? Sweeney Todd?

  2. improbablefiction

    Nope. A son giving a eulogy about his father’s cremation. Apparently is should be obvious, at least according to the buckster.

  3. “I thought how his _______ tounge burst into _______” MIGHT be the worst possibly blanks they could’ve left.

    “Obvious” is an overstatement. Obviously.

  4. Genevieve

    ok here is my guesses:

  5. improbablefiction

    You got three right… since I know Rubz is going to do this Ill skype you and let you know which ones they are

  6. Fine, I’ll play your game.

    1. Life
    2. Imprinted
    3. Lips
    4. Silenced
    5. Flame
    6. Heaven
    7. Daily
    8. Cried
    9. Ashes
    10. Rise
    11. Begs

  7. Genevieve

    O.K. I need to know if Caleb got any right!!!!!

  8. improbablefiction

    Caleb got five right.

  9. Rubz

    Um…I wanted your answers…I wanted to know which was the one he couldnt believe you put down xD I will do this later though..packing bleeeeh

  10. Genevieve

    ok second try:
    1.Life 2.shine
    3.mouth 4.scared
    5.flame 6.flavors
    7.daily 8.begged
    9.bread 10.rise

  11. improbablefiction

    gen- 2nd try: five right and one very very close one.

  12. Genevieve

    are they the same 5 as caleb

  13. improbablefiction

    no… ill let you know which ones 😀

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